普通: I have never seen such a wonderful show. 升级: Never have I seen such a wonderful show.
② 强调句 It is ... that ...
It is teamwork that matters most in this competition.
③ 非谓语作状语 (-ing / -ed)
Hearing the news, I couldn t wait to share it with you. Faced with difficulties, we should never give up.
④ 定语从句
It is a city where tradition and modern life blend perfectly.
⑤ 名词性从句
What impresses me most is your dedication to the team.
⑥ 虚拟语气
If I were you, I would take part without hesitation. I would appreciate it if you could reply soon.
⑦ 无灵主语 (用抽象名词作主语)
The thought of meeting you again fills me with excitement.
⑧ with 复合结构
She walked in, with a big smile on her face.
⑨ 部分否定 / 比较结构
Not all changes are good, but this one truly is. Nothing is more rewarding than helping others.
⑩ 同位语 / 插入语 升信息密度
Mr. Li, an experienced teacher, gave us great advice.
2.3 连接词:把逻辑缝起来
阅卷看的是逻辑顺不顺。下方第⑤节有交互逻辑图,这里先记四大类:
递进: what is more / besides / moreover / in addition / furthermore
转折: however / nevertheless / on the contrary / while / yet
因果: therefore / as a result / consequently / thus / for this reason
举例/总结: for instance / such as / in short / to sum up / all in all
⚠ 别全文只会 and / but / so。一篇里换着用 3–4 个高级连接词,逻辑分立刻上来。
③ 全体裁地图(触发信号 → 标准动作 → 范例 → 陷阱)
触发信号
题目出现 invite / suggest / apply / apologize / thank / a notice / help me with...,或情景里你是写信人,要 邀请/建议/通知/申请/道歉/感谢/求助。
标准动作
① 判体裁 → ② 套对应开头句 → ③ 主体分 2–3 点(每点 = 要点 + 一句展开 + 连接词)→ ④ 套对应结尾句 → ⑤ 检查:要点全否、亮点句 ≥3、连接词换花样、人称时态一致。
范例(建议信主体一段)
To begin with, you d better make a detailed plan. What is more, joining a study group can keep you motivated. If I were you, I would also take regular breaks to stay fresh.
陷阱
①体裁套错开头(给建议信用了邀请信开头);②只堆要点不展开(每点要有 1 句解释/举例);③通篇 and/but/so;④落款写真名(应写 Li Hua);⑤字数严重不足或超太多。
④ 体裁选择器(选一个 → 看它的框架与套句)
交互 1 · 体裁选择器
↑ 选一个体裁,看它的 开头句 / 主体写法 / 结尾句
⑤ 连接词逻辑图(点逻辑类型 → 看连接词如何改变句意走向)
交互 2 · 逻辑关系动画
↑ 点一种逻辑关系,看两个分句被什么连接词连成什么关系
⑥ 句子升级器(普通句 → 多种高级句式)
交互 3 · 句子升级器
选一个普通句,再选一种高级句式,看它被逐字改写成亮点句:
⑦ 高级句构建器(选成分 → 现场拼出强调句)
交互 4 · 强调句构建器
以 It is ... that ... 强调句为例,点不同成分,看强调点如何变化:
⑧ 三段式骨架可视化(逐段亮起,看一封信怎么长出来)
交互 5 · 骨架生长动画
⑨ 字数 / 结构进度可视化
交互 6 · 结构进度条
勾选你已经写到的部分,看结构完整度实时上涨(应用文 ≈ 80–100 词最稳):
⑩ 作文检查清单(交互勾选)
交互 7 · 交卷前自检
勾完看你能不能安全交卷
⑪ 易错集
① 体裁开头套错:建议信写成 I am writing to invite you...。先确认体裁再下笔。
② 只列要点不展开:每个要点至少 1 句解释或举例,否则像列提纲。
③ 连接词单一:全篇 and/but/so。换 what is more / however / as a result。
④ 人称/时态漂移:邀请是将来事用将来时;道歉是已发生用过去时。落款统一 Li Hua。
⑤ 高级句式硬塞:倒装/虚拟语气用错语序反扣分。宁可稳,也别错。
⑥ 字数失控:严重不足或大幅超字都影响分。控在要求 ±10%。
⑦ 中式直译:如 open the television。优先用学过的地道搭配 turn on the TV。